Full of energy , full of vigour..
it played with the heights, from low to higher
it had in itself the limitless ocean
it was free... bereft of any worldly commotion
like a fairy, playing in the sunlight,
it kept playing.. with its own tides..
all of a sudden, it splashed on my sand fort..
destroying and ,taking away my creation ashore
sweeping across all the filth too
it went back without ,complaining to the blue
merging itself with the sea now calmly
it aint had any fear, of losing its identity
now ,indeed , it left me wondering
with some random thoughts, that just kept hovering..
Should I now complain of my broken fort..
or thank the wave and enjoy, the now clean sparkling shore
A dilemma to strike a positive note over the negative. I loved the way you used the word commotion.
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ReplyDeleteLoved the last lines :)
Thank you Ghazala :)
ReplyDeleteLovely lines ... meaningful and free flowing !!!
ReplyDeleteLovely lines....The last two lines made me wonder too!
ReplyDeleteSome misfortunes are blessings in disguise....
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Congrats !!! Here it lies http://anupampatracontemplates.blogspot.in/2012/07/morning-gift.html
Hey thanks Anupam, thats really sweet of you.. I am glad you found me worthy of it.
Deletebeautiful lines...just keep going...on and on :)
ReplyDeleteParadise lost is sometimes heaven found ;)
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